The writing isn't very clear in this image so here are the issues raised:
- A different backdrop to be used? Brown paper to signify a scrapbook? Although I feel blue maintains the house style, has a relaxing mood (which matches the song) and contrasts well with the red.
- Adjustments to thank-you letter. Mainly keyboard errors and shortening of sentences.
- Reduce size of artist songwriting as it is too blown up and appears blurry.
- Add an Instax of beach.
- Make track list bolder.
- Add social networking sites to broaden profile.
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